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Solid first release. First time I'm seeing an AVN focus on an idol group, so I'm very interested in seeing what the future holds in store for your story, what subjects you touch on, what you explore/comment on, etc...

The tempo of the game is likely slower than most AVNs, but I think it's fine to have games with different pacings. You deserve a lot of praise for the text effects you employ, I don't think I've ever seen an AVN use so many, so much, it gives the gave its own identity, which is nice. 

I found one continuity error, which is that I didn't peek on Alice, yet MC still had a line about seeing her room full of bears and her doing stuff when finding the teddy in the garden. Other than that, my main pet-peev is that it gets tiring seeing "a few minutes later..." so many times. Consider employing other phrases: "a short drive later", "a short walk later", or simply use none and just imply the passage of time.

Best of lucks with development, looking forward to the next release!

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Wow! This is actually very helpful feedback, Di! Thank you so much for taking the time to write this all out to share with me, and I appreciate the kind words too.

I think given this is a game without any sci-fi or fantasy elements, it's bound to feel slower than other AVNS. I plan on making up for that with characters and writing that feel more believable, "alive", and enjoyable.

Good point on the continuity error with Alice. This was an oversight, and it will be fixed!

I really like this feedback about the "a few minutes later..." screen. I agree with you that it gets quite repetitive, and other phrases like you've shared keep it more interesting. I will definitely be adding this to the next patch of 0.1 and all of my future updates from now on.

Again, thank you so much for taking the time to write this all out. I sincerely appreciate you helping me make STELLA a better game with your feedback born from care and appreciation 🧡