Sorry, but it looks too clustered. It looks messy, no offense.
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Might just be me but I think it may be just the floor tiles that need a tweak. Either the detail of the cracks needs reducing or the colour of the cracks need lightening to make them less prominent. Experiment and see what you think looks best. The rest seems like it should still work. Nice pack overall :)