The start to this was the most realistic story line I seen in one of these novels , it sorta feel like this could happen in the real world if the guy in question if hes a gigachad with the luck of a tribe of Leprecauns:) I like the plot developement as well. Im tossing this out as a suggestion so take it as the unsolicited advice it is but consider some sensory play options other than spanks as punishment. I found irl that a pain slut would hide from the Dom when the tickling is brought in as a punishment for example and is something that can be done in a public setting opening a whole lot of possible options. I like the remote vibe option the box, I wonder who it will get used on first.... Good job on this in any case.