Good demo, I enjoyed the set-up and the atmosphere, and thoroughly enjoyed Martha running around causing mischief, but have a few notes:
- I'm sure this will be explained more in the full release, but the main antagonist never really says anything about the fact that his wife and son are not in the house, yet a woman he clearly dislikes is there. Could he try to ask her where his wife and son are?
- I didn't understand the attic scene - why when he gets the flashlight does he suddenly decide to investigate there? Once again, maybe this is a lead-up that was left out for the demo, but it just seems like a strange decision.
- WHY DO WE HATE MARTHA SO MUCH? WHAT DID SHE DO?
- AI voice-overs really pulled me out of the immersion - if you're a single dev I get it, it's simpler to do that, but hey, I'm willing to lend my voice if it makes the experience more believable. Happy to help in the indie game scene.
Overall, I want to know more about the family and I have a cheeky suspicion that the main character may have being naughty things on his 'business trip' - but the best thing about a demo is leaving the player wanting more. I want to find out more about this.