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After realizing how long I've laid in bed at night thinking about this particular IF, I knew I had to make an account to share my thoughts. The lore, the cast, the story! The journal entries at the beginning of each chapter left me hungry for so much more, and I'm afraid I'm going to find myself opening and closing this page like a refrigerator door—with hopes that maybe, just maybe, it'll become a case of Schrödinger's update.

I was instantly captivated by Robin and their route. As a gender non-conforming person myself, it was super heartwarming to see representation like this in an IF this well written and cared for. All of that aside, I think I would have fallen in love with them either way. Each character is written so well and with so much care that it's hard not to love all of them.

Heron’s route was super sweet as well, although I may be a bit biased as I always find myself loving the routes that involve a romance blossoming from a childhood friendship. Every route is just so delicately crafted and handled so beautifully in its own, wondrous way. I could go on and on about each individual character and how much each of them have infatuated me, but I'll spare you the trouble. We wouldn't want this comment to take up too much space, after all!

I'll definitely be an avid promoter of this work, and by all hell is it deserving of the praise. I've already talked my friends' ears off with all my over enthusiastic rants about Viatica. This story has also been tempting me to write my own IF,  almost to a worrying degree... Maybe if I figure out how to code one, hah! 

Praise be to this amazing work of fiction! 

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Oh my goodness, I don’t even know where to begin, but first off… THANK YOU!! That was a lovely and well thought out comment and my cheeks hurt by how much I’m grinning. 😁 I am touched that you created an account just to share your thoughts!

I’m so glad you’re enjoying the characters, particularly Robin, and that you found their route authentic. At the risk of over sharing… much of their character and dialogue is actually straight from the mouth of my son, a trans man, and his own journey of identity, and I couldn’t have told Robin’s story without his help. (He was stoked to read your comment, btw!)

Thank you for telling your friends about this IF, it’s very much appreciated! I promise the updates will be regular-ish. 😅 Chapter 10 has been difficult to write because it’s a fairly emotional chapter, but it’s nearly done, then I just need to code and proofread it.

And you should definitely write your own IF! I encourage you to check out Twine: Chapbook. It’s been very easy to learn, partly because the creator made a detailed, comprehensive how-to guide for it, which even included notes on how to add music.

Thank you again, I appreciate your support! ❤️