Hi Euan,
I like the idea with the meditative pauses with music. It helped immerse in the idea of long stretches of time.
Also taking the perspective of a starship felt fresh to me.
Greetings, Val
PS: thanks for your comment on my one-pager
The thought was that it's up to the player to decide, but I put the arrival event at the end of the list to imply that they might want to try some of the others first. I agree that it's a little unclear - that's really helpful feedback. Thank you!