That's great work so far I think. I had two pieces of advice (do remember that I'm inexperienced still):
- The artwork looks bland to me - it needs to be more striking and could even have a broader color palette (I suppose the art style is still in development)
- Max Payne 1 was really memorable in the way it built the sense of a rundown area with a few hobos roaming about or watching TV in their home drugged up beyond limits - maybe that can be an inspiration to add to the tone of the place
Will be following your work, thanks for the updates!