Hi, just a little mistake in one of the first passages, after you shake Oliver's hand:
> No one has called your name 'cool before'
Shouldn't it be "No one has called your name 'cool' before", taking the word before out of the quote?
Yes, you're right. Give me an email or a discord user so I can send you a copy.
Sure. I'll edit that out later, but here's my Discord: [redacted] please send another message once you're available so my username doesn't stay out in the open for too long.
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