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This was so adorable!!

The characters are all very charming, I'm excited to see how the final game looks like!! ๐Ÿฅฐโค

I think my favorites were Percy and Emile, their routes were so much fun and I loved the dynamics between them and the MC!! 

Percy's devotion and how he's basically an ass to everyone except the MC has me SO hooked ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ˜‚ he's only MC's priest and the rest can suck it in his world ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚. 

Emile's personality was such a breath of fresh air!! I love how he's really kind yet isn't afraid to speak his mind, especially if someone is being rude to him (and not even caring if it's the MC). 

Glyph was a pleasant surprise as well, I wasn't expecting a talk about sexual and romantic intimacy with him but it was so well done!!

Wren is such a blushy sweetheart, I love how he wants to take care of MC but also respects that they want to be strong.

Greer is so sassy and I love him for it ๐Ÿ˜‚ His no-bullshit personality was very charming, he says it like it is; especially if someone dares to insult MC's beauty!

Lior was so sweet, I loved that he's considerate of what MC wants to do and doesn't force them into what he wants. I only felt his route was a tad shorter than the rest of the guys, which was a bit of a shame 'cause I wanted to see more ๐Ÿ™ˆ

Styles is probably the one I could connect the least with, I think ๐Ÿค” The plot of his route about there being Nephelim haters was interesting and I loved seeing the MC show their strengths whenever these people were too much. But because of this I think there weren't as many scenes between them and Stiles so I felt like I didn't know him much at the end of the route. It's probably because this is a demo but I thought I'd share my input ๐Ÿ’ช

The art was GORGEOUS, I really loved all the sprites and their expressions!!

I think my only critique is in regards to some bits of programming. The transitions for the music, sprites and backgrounds felt a bit all over the place. Sometimes it was very smooth while other times it was very abrupt and it made me lose immersion a few times. I also thought the music was a bit loud at times but I didn't find a way to lower it from the game itself while I was playing a route.

There were a few bugs I found too but I'll report those in the bug report link you guys shared!

Overall, I found this very enjoyable and am looking forward to seeing more of these guys ๐Ÿ’–โค๐Ÿ’•

Thank you for making this game!! ๐ŸŒธ

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Tysm Pri for the detailed feedback! Percy and Emile are also my favs for different reasons. Emile is my actual husband, and Percy is my fav to write, with Greer as a close second. This was all incredible helpful and so sweet.

Apologies for the programming, I've learned RPG Maker definitely doesn't hold up when it comes to visual novels in the same way Renpy' does, that's for sure....(I'm already planning to have an update next Otome jam, with more expressions, cg's, music etc.. I think I may move all the scripts over into renpy instead. As you aren't the first, and surely not the last to point out the flaws in regards to accessibility and direction.

I hope you enjoy the full game, future side games, and eventual update to this game in the future <3