This is a really impressive project, the visuals and the style of story telling, it has subtly and good direction. Great work.
Little bug I found: I went to the gym on the first night it gave me a chance, then went on the computer, then the game made me go to the gym again lol
The later the game goes, the more the plot jumps around a bit TOO quickly I think, but I am almost certain this is an early development thing, rather than the final plan for the story, so don't worry about it.
I really loved the story, characters, and their interactions. The ending was satisfying and clever, though I was hoping for a "round 2" if you know what I mean. Thank you so much for making this and sharing it with us all!