Really great ambiance and vibe on this!
I have to agree with FoxHyode that the change to the second section at 1:35 feels a bit jarring, I'm not sure if having the talharpa stop playing together with the voices and letting the reverb decay before starting the second section would make flow better, just one thing I felt might work.
The spatial stuff works great, giving this the feel of being performed in a big space like a church to me.
Stellar stuff!
I had the Talharpa playing, but I did a rerecording and missed putting that part back and was running out of time.
My assessment of how I need to approach this in the future is to do more of an outline ahead of time, and record at a tempo I actually naturally want to sing at. I recorded it too slowly initially, so the issues with the timing weren't as apparent until I sped it up. To make it worse, I prerecorded it slow, then sped it up after rerecording.
I've decided I need to adjust my process after this jam, and be more deliberate about having a clearer process from start to finish.
Thank you for the feedback! :)
