The composition and textures here are awesome.
I feel like in the mix, some of the instruments are a little dry and flat and bring the sound forward too much. More space, more playing around with reverbs would make the mix work better.
I think with organic instruments like this, spending more time on the dynamics of the stringed instruments would help set everything in better. Then again, more reverb can often mask the midi sound.
Very well done though, I liked the composition. I actually disagree with a below commenter - I think you did a great job of portraying a storm rolling in, but where the storm is beautiful rather than a threat. I might make the sound maybe a little more "slow and rolling" to really bring that in, but it's pretty close as is in how it communicates. Reverb would really, really add to that sense of space! I'd love to hear you layer and play around with big, clean reverbs and post it in the discord, tag me.