First thing first I love the art, the writing, and sound effects. I haven't found many games that make me feel sick to my stomach so this is great. I personally like more description of the environment and feelings of the player but it's not bad at all. It was fun to play and I really like the added touch that we can text him what we want. Not many Visual Novels do that so it was really cool to see. I think the only thing I would suggest to improve is maybe add a bit of context but it might be too early to go into the finer details of this story. It's still really good! I'm excited to see the final product. AND THE SECRET ENDING WAS SO COOL TOO I LOVE IT