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The story is very cliche, but I assume that's what you were trying to go for considering this is a test project. It has excellent grammar compared to most other visual novel games I see when I sort by newest first on this website. I also really like the music used, it's relevant and pleasing. The big variety of choices in the story is good, many visual novels I play from this site have few choices which makes the games less fun. 

Generally, the game is very well developed, just bland due to the images/audio obviously downloaded from the internet and the bunch of cliches scattered all over the story, but since this is a test project I assume this was intended to prevent "wasting original ideas" and I don't blame you

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Thank you very much for the feedback. My intention with this game was to test out as much as possible with the Ren'Py engine (choices, music, character placement and whatnot). I realise how cliche the story is, but then again, most of the effort was put into everywhere except the script ^^

I'm really happy to see that what I begun to make as a simple prototype for things to come can actually stand on its own, so thanks!