The story is very cliche, but I assume that's what you were trying to go for considering this is a test project. It has excellent grammar compared to most other visual novel games I see when I sort by newest first on this website. I also really like the music used, it's relevant and pleasing. The big variety of choices in the story is good, many visual novels I play from this site have few choices which makes the games less fun.
Generally, the game is very well developed, just bland due to the images/audio obviously downloaded from the internet and the bunch of cliches scattered all over the story, but since this is a test project I assume this was intended to prevent "wasting original ideas" and I don't blame you