Hi! I played your game and I really dug its aesthetic! I loved the rubber hose art style and the watercolor backgrounds (i am a sucker for those!) the voice acting was also top notch, everyone did such a good job!
mY ONLY CRITIQUE IS THE READABILITY OF THE TEXT WHICH IS A SHAME BECAUSE THIS IS SUCH A FUN STORY! I'M NOT SURE WHAT LIGHT.VN IS CAPABLE OF (I.E. IF YOU CAN INCLUDE MULTIPLE FONT OPTIONS), BUT IF POSSIBLE, INCLUDING MORE ACCESSIBLE OPTIONS LIKE ATKINSON HYPERLEGIBLE IN A FUTURE UPDATE WOULD HELP SO MANY PLAYERS! i WOULD SUGGEST INCREASING THE LINE SPACING/HEIGHT IF POSSIBLE, SINCE AT TIMES, THE DEFAULT FONT HAD ISSUES COLLIDING WITH A PREVIOUS LINE!
This is a great start, especially for a game done in 30 days! I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO THE project'S DEVELOPMENT. :)
