I am a detective who is trying to solve the mysterious death of a famous Bollywood actor. My investigations lead to supernatural conclusions that I can't seem to shake, and which continue to haunt me even after the case is closed.
I didn't experience any issues. There was a part near the end where it feels like you break the fourth wall and inform me as the reader that where I am is the result of my decisions. It's a little confusing because I'm not actually clear if you are speaking to me as the reader or as the character.
Some great things:
Really wonderful writing which fit the noir genre very well. "Chhota's information was a match struck in a gunpowder factory." Very fun writing that was a pleasure to read!
You introduced some really memorable characters which had a lot of personality despite their brief appearance in the story. Felt very rewarding to have these fleeting, but intense interactions.
I felt like I always had surprising and rewarding choices. I actually played through the game three times because I found all of the details revealed in each playthrough very satisfying!