Ahem.... the story was great, though the detective and killer have distinct designs. The design and the length is very consistent. Though my one problem is with the character Jordi. He is amazing and how early he died really made me depressed. He was funny, amazing, and didn't believe in ghosts, and having killed him off in 4 lines truly is despicable. But aside from that one fault the rest of the story is consistent. (would be better with Jordi but I digress) Overall great game, it gets my vote.