Of course! I do think the story has an interesting concept though obv we're still early in the vn. I did notice in the convo between dane and thistle they had commented on the pay and how folks avoid the rifts twice which made me think i had accidentally scrolled back lol. And as another had commented, stuff like sound effects definitely does wonders to help with immersion which could be something worth looking into.
I am curious though, especially it being a mostly linear vn and noticing the romance tag, is there romanceable routes? Or is it more story focused