The story is good, but I do wish there were more gameplay designs. All I did was click somewhere on the screen, I don't need to click on the arrow to continue the story. I wish there could be more sound effects in the game because the jumpscare part was not so effective for me. And maybe fewer slides with only one character.
Adding more animations can make it better too, such as making characters look like they were sketched by a marker at the same time they were mentioned in the story.