Aww, "Mr.Cat is pleased”, I think the art is very fitting for the game too. And yes, as the writer I did struggle for not having enough time to build the story with my pace of writing. I did realise after spending time polishing the beginning that “nope, can´t keep polishing the writing like this, there's no time!”, but still I'm glad that the extra work I did for the beginning shows.I have to confess that in the end I just felt victorious for having completed a story for the game, but I agree that there definitely is room for development.
A much extended polished game with multiple endings is definitely in order…;)