A small suggested dialogue change: When saying goodbye to Monica. If she says 'Honor to Nublia?', the MC can correct her with 'Honor to <Tribename> or Honor to you is fine, you don't have to lie.'
After the 'Move on' Monica says 'Honor to Nublia?'. There is no error or so. You could add my suggested line after that as a joke because she hates Nublia, but not the MC.
You don't have to do anything but thanks for the fast reply.
