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Thanks for the feedback, and the compliments! Layout, formatting, and keeping to the page count restriction was something I struggled with, and using columns didn't seem to be helping. For personal reasons I needed to submit my adventure well before the deadline, so I hit a point where I just had to decide I was done messing with it for the time being. After the jam, I will definitely take all the advice I get to heart and make some improvements, starting with moving the map.

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That's great to hear! I've kept circling back to this one throughout the day. Also wanted to say that A: putting population limits on the encounter table is super good design and something I wish everyone did (me included), and B: you actually made the banshee's wail a really interesting and terrifying mechanic compared to how it normally works. Forgot to put those two in my first comment!