Great variety in the charts for the "Trinkets you find laying around" and "In this room, you see". A goblin cruise ship is really an awesome idea for an adventure.
I think the section "How I run this mess?" should be right up front and I think some hooks or a bit more of a push for players to explore would be useful, in case players are indecisive.
I'm not a fan of having modern stand-in technology in a medieval setting, like the gear DJ Brillex is using, but it would really be up to the GM how they choose to present the adventure. I also readily admit that 'acoustic dubstep' is an amazing concept.
The portraits and characters descriptions were all great too.
I noticed you didn't have a cover image in the game jam so I put one together, I hope this is useful!
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Thank you SOOOO much for making me this lovely cover image, I will use it right away! I really appreciate your thoughts- I know the arcanotech stuff is a bit out of the purview of something like Knave (maybe a better fit for Troika or Electric Bastionland) so I can't fault you there and feel that many will have a similar reaction as you.