I really liked the warmth and danger of the cover The art for the map and the lichen knight were both excellent, really all of the illustrations were.
I wouldn't want to work in the camp... Which makes it a great place to drop players into.
You did a good job of keeping a consistent vibe, it all feels dangerous. I also liked that you included resolutions for both if players accept the aspect's deal and if they refuse, as well as the scenario changes that occur on returning back to the camp.
I found myself misreading the names for the swamp 'Bellmire' and the cathedral 'Bellspire', it might be helpful to write each in a different font or a different color.