I appreciated the pronunciation guide and clickable Table of Contents. I like the replay-ability with a random set-up for the adventure.
It's all very cleanly laid out and easy to use. Nice job distilling the adventure to just the most important information. I love the dialogue bubbles, that was a great idea to give characters personality without wasting space. You did a great job presenting a culture and making the world feel alive through images as well as text.
It would be awesome to see players in combat with devourer demons.
The FAQ at the end was helpful too.