Now it's my turn to say that YOUR layout is great! I love the way it flows, and how the maps and descriptions are combined. Also, in general I just love settings where the gods are closer, more personal, and can be interacted with by PCs, and this nails that mystical vibe. Plus the godly realms being in a cave yet somehow outdoors is perfect. Beautiful adventure!
Edit: almost forgot to mention, because it was at the very start: pronunciation guides are my favorite, thank you so much for including these!