I was just stunned. It was probably my first visual novel that was so straightforward and honest with the player. You should have seen my face when Daniel amputated all our limbs...However, it seems to me that the description was a little bit left out. Putting the squeeze on it. I would like the process itself to be described in a little more detail. Also, as for me, there are problems with y/n emotions, as if they do not exist at all. We have very little reaction to all of Daniel's actions.
thank you for the feedback! i agree that the pacing isn't the best and that i need to work on my writing, HAHA.. i haven't written anything fictional or descriptive in a long time.. i think i focused more on the aspect of torture rather than the characters' emotions or the story, but i'll make sure to expand on that in the future. thanks again! ☆ (this is just an experimental game!)