I think this game is really smooth -- the transitions and interactions are great. good job. my suggestion is more photos. that's what we are there for of course :) In particular, the photoshoots that she does with Nathan -- we should be able to see a bunch of sexy and cute shots and some "oops" accidental exposure would be fun. And also, during some parts there is a loooooot of text, but few photos, it'd be nice to increase the frequency a bit more.