Greetings. There are two scenes apart from the ending (where we can see "end of the ch. 2") that has some errors. I'm not sure if this one is supposed to be like this:
but in the other scene where Hannah giving the bj, for a single frame she appears in her pink top:
Also Helen has a visible 'hairless' spot on top of her head, so you might want to hide it:
Also I'd like to point out to the opinion that MC could've been more intelligent than he is. I think he's not totally dumb, maybe a little. He's more like naive and inexperienced. I like how he shared some knowledge about outdoor activities. He absolutely doesn't needs to be an alpha male or something. Just more of that working class smarts from him. I wish he'd be more resourceful in the following chapters.
And thank you for your outstanding work.