So far, I am nothing but impressed by what this game is, and it is only a demo. I am so very excited for what's to come.
Some thoughts and requests for future updates:
I'm looking forward to when the scenes will match what the doll is wearing, and if possible, would love to remove the doll climax scene every time Quinn climaxes, instead it would be so much hotter if the actual scene showed Quinn climaxing.
Showing him repeatedly climax in one scene and it being from the actual scene and not from the side bar animation would be so much hotter. I can imagine that the drawing for in-scene climaxing would only require maybe 3-7 frames if anything, and I understand that is more work to do but would be greatly appreciated for sure. Currently, the Morgana butt fuck scene has a little bit of what I am saying here where Quinn's face and penis change showing that he is climaxing, but having him spurt maybe 2 or 3 times for the animation would be hot.
Also, when the cage is on and the butt plug is on, I noticed the Slimegirl can only make out with you, and not do any other scene, is it possible to show an animation or scene where the enemies remove the butt plug and proceed to fuck Quinn and when done, put it back? My god that would be so hot and amazing. Also, if the the cage would show up in other scenes, that would be great.
Not sure if you're thinking about implementing a hypnosis spell, but that would be super hot if Morgana would hypnotize Quinn and for like 30 seconds you seek out being used as a toy from the other enemies, it would be even hotter if the text tells you that the enemies know you're being hypnotized to let them do this.
A minigame where you have to fight the hypnosis would be great, similar to being caught but a little different to liven up the gameplay would be nice. In that same thought process, maybe having the resist minigame allow for you not to be immediately fucked but maybe have a two phase minigame? The first phase is where they are basically undressing you or tying you down and you have to resist it with the minigame (or don't and choose to fail the minigame by pressing say "F" to fail on purpose) and then the second phase have it where you actually get fucked, sucking cock, etc, and the resist minigame is still present and the "F" to fail option is there too.
Also, having Quinn have dialogue and the enemies have dialogue would be an amazing addition, I know you have the text when you stop resisting, but that seems more like a third person perspective of what is happening. So having Quinn's slow (or fast) descent into corruption would be hot if we can see his dialogue both external and internal as he resists or gives in to what is happening to him. That recommendation for the "F" for fail choice might have a dialogue where he says, "Maybe just a little bit," or "I can't stop myself for some reason, I just want it."
Imagine if the Betty was aggressive and said things like "Resist all you want, you're taking my cock and my load up your boy pussy."
That would definitely add some spice to the game.
Down the road, it would be hot if we get a story plot to follow that gives us insight into why Quinn would put himself into such a dangerous situation with all of these enemies, like he is trying to stop a disease that has turned women into Dickgirls and they attack and fuck indiscriminately so he was called upon as the hero of the land to stop them and the mastermind behind it all by either knocking the enemies unconscious (or killing them, whatever) with weapons/magic or subjecting himself to being fucked (or fucking if that is something the fans want) by the enemies to quell their disease, but by doing so, the disease slowly corrupts him when say he ingests or is injected with the diseased semen/slime.
Slowly, but surely you either get a pure run ending where he saves the land and keeps his dignity/virginities or you get a corrupted run ending where he is now the mastermind's fucktoy and used by the mastermind and his pawns as a sexual relief cumdump.
Gameplay wise, it would be nice to be able to sell or combine items to get more gold or to get better equipment. Also, being able to reroll the buying items screen would be nice, either using health, shame, corruption, or more gold as currency to do the reroll would be hot, or something completely different like it is a vendor character who you have to either pay for a reroll or suck her cock or get fucked to reroll for new items in the buy screen would be so hot. Maybe every time you reroll you have to pay more gold or be more bold in what you do for the vendor, like a handjob is the first reroll, then a blowjob is the second reroll, then eating her ass is the third reroll, and finally the fourth reroll is letting her fuck and cum in you.
Doing any of those sex rerolls obviously will corrupt Quinn and infect him further with the disease. What would be hot is if he slowly starts to look more and more like a dickgirl as he gets corrupted or ingests the semen/slime, like his lips get puffier, his dick gets smaller, he gets more feminine and grows breasts. Maybe you can gain corruption levels as well and have to choose what parts of your body change as you gain more levels, and it can be seen as a debuff just like the lewd skill tree is currently, like bigger breasts and a bigger ass would make Quinn slower and not as strong.
Also, bodywriting would be hot, like Betty writing things like "Easy" on your ass cheek, or putting a tally mark on your face, and it takes a command to erase it like when you empty cum.
It would be even hotter if the original base Quinn is actually more masculine from the beginning because he is the hero and is actually not a sissy or gay at all. Maybe he has shorter hair, and is not so feminine, like he is actually a little buff, still small framed, but cut muscular, and as he gets corrupted he loses his muscles and his hair grows longer and so on like my previous recommendation about body modification levels. Through this horrible adventure he slowly becomes bisexual and then fully a gay sissy as a result of the corruption he gets along the way.
Adding to my previous recommendation for dialogue, it would be hot if The Vendor Character kept memory of your previous choices and says things like, "Hey last time you gave me such a good handjob, maybe instead of gold you can do that again?" or "Why even bother with your gold, why not give me that mouth again?"
To me, that would make this game so much more amazing, and I know all that I've recommended are tall orders but food for thought if you wanted to use any of those ideas, I think it would be awesome if all or even some of the recommendations are considered.
