I'm not nearly done with the demo, but I will say the way this is written is a breath of fresh air. I have a really hard time reading, both on an attention level and on an actual comprehension level. Sometimes, it gets so bad that I get migraines, but the way this story was formatted made it very easy for me! No risk of tears for the first time in a while, which I'll have to say thank you for!
I would also like to say to anyone reading this that everything I said does not detract from the actual quality of the writing. While it is digestable I think it is also very good at conveying what it needs to convey and very easy to immerse yourself in. Please do not think the writing is dumbed down in any way, it's accessibility does not detract from it's enjoyablity.