Honestly, I want to put this comment on a plinth. You Get it. I feel so seen, and am so glad to hear I captured the essence of it for you. Everything just seemed to synthesise so well!
I am...honestly not very confident in my ability to write lyrics or poetry (and especially rosc, which are considered pretty fiendish in the scholarship I've read) that stands up to any scrutiny at all. I agree it would absolutely complete a work like this, and am considering it for the second installment, but if done poorly would detract more than it would add, so I'm not sure if I'll go for it.
(And oh hey, my current keyboard actually doesn't like diacritics either, something I keep meaning to fix.)