I loved the Dr. Seuss-like drawing and the creepiness factor in the game! The farthest I got to was chapter 5 where James tried to run away until he ran right into the Gurmy Lurm. I couldn't get past the chapter because there were no checkpoints. If you want to improve this game, I suggest that you increase the timer on parts where you have to type out long sentences with multiple red words on them. It's easy to make mistakes when you are short on time.