Your ideas and writing are strong. There are some similarities to Asian traditional music which I found interesting. The texture of short sounds in the first 30 seconds are great - I would love to sit in this texture a little longer, maybe with the viola on top. Nice feeling of calmness and slight sadness in the first half. The second half is a bit too busy for me with the low piano chords and constant rhythms on top. I think it's a cool idea, but I would keep the tempo slow and consistent, try to voice the piano chords in a slightly higher register, and simplify the melodies on top. Still, it's a really great work!