Awesome art, cool ass textboxes designs, pretty nice unsettling moments. It would be pretty cool to play it as a full-fledged game, but I suppose there's some more lore you couldn't fit in for the deadline (I see those hastily-nailed planks under the carpet lol). Oddly enough, my main nitpick are the lamps; they're the only see-through floating object in this world, which are acknowledged for a role that could have been fulfilled by any other object in the room. Other than that though, I'm longing for more