It took me 1hr 45mins to play thru. Honestly i really enjoyed the way they talk, it started a bit weird for me but I got used to it pretty quickly and the way dialogues are written made me smile more than I imagined it would. The relationship between characters is solid for me. I love the jokes and the openness when any of them talk.
I play vns for the stories and this was an amazing start. I would like a walkthrough because like I said I just enjoy the story which is meant to be seen as the dev wanted to show. The action with consequences can be played without it but having a walkthrough given by the dev is always appreciated.
It's a amazing start and I hope you don't give up on this vn. I am very interested to see where this story goes and I hope others find it just as interesting and amazing.
If you need any advice or help I know a discord server where there are few devs and people who help others. You can join them if you want. The server belongs to another dev who created "CosyCafe" and they are all very friendly there. Also you can share your vn and it's progress there.
I wish you all the very best and take care.