Thumbs up for going for something a little bit more experimental. I am quite a bit into drone/noise music so I think it is really cool to have it represented in this jam.
What I look for the most in this type of music is a unified aesthetic when it comes to the sounds used/produced. For my taste, the track lacks a little in regards to this cohesion. When listening I do not get a clear picture in my head of where the track is supposed to take me. With regards to production I would argue that there could be some more low-end rumble in the louder parts to give them some more weight. Apart from that, I really like it.