This is a fun and interesting concept. I honestly think a sandbox variation of this VN or a sandbox VN style sequel would be better. But from what I've seen in the comments your still working on improving either your development, your coding, or both. So I'll leave this as a suggestion for a future reference as I really do think this would make for a fun sandbox VN style game where you can interact, have fun with, or have rematches with limited consequences. maybe have a system where certain characters are more dominant or submissive in private depending on whether you defeat them and have an option to have rematches to try and switch the roles around. But again this is a suggestion for future reference once you've improved in the areas that need improving. That being said I look forward to seeing more good content from you.