I havent had a chance to go through all the endings but I enjoyed the writing and I especially enjoyed my secret message (no spoilers)
Absolutely! I really like the visuals of the distorted hands and I think that some added visuals to the rest of the experience could be neat. Especially since most of the experience is on a black screen, it could allow for some extra hard hitting moments with some subtle visuals. Going from black to heavy text and a disturbing image. But I do like the atmosphere with the black screen, it feels very claustrophobic. <3