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Game Suggestions: This game has a lot of potential but right now I think a lot of it is wasted. Here a few ideas to implement that make the game better in my opinion.

1. Emersion: right now, there are just chapters you click trough doesn’t really feel like a conversation I have with my girl on a phone. Merge all chapters together and only have different contacts. There can be a way to load the different chapters to not restart every thing if you want to try something new.

2. Bug Fixing: I know bug fixing isn’t always easy but its really bad if the game just stops working and you have to close and restart the app every other minuet.

3. Build up: there should be a buildup try to establish a real relation ship with her. First show the love and affection and then slowly transition to the NTR. Also, its better in my opinion if she is trying to hide it more don’t let her spill out everything with his slightest concerns make it hard to discover her cheating and maybe let it be leaked by someone else if he takes to long to get behind it but is still concerned. There are many different ways to approach it and I think you can do it but try to build yourself a good foundation and make quality content rather then just a lot with many pictures. Let her tease him and try to convince him slowly that maybe it was his idea in the first place? Let her have a secret Instagram account with lewd Fotos with other guys? Many possibilities.

4. Better Gallery: Right now you have all fotos from the start make it that you unlock them while playing with a counter how many you collected so far. There could still be a cheat to unlock all if you want but don’t just let them all be there without doing anything.

5. Story: Try make different routes you already have it somewhat but right now those are more of single questions leading to single answers I could have seen her have sex 100times play dumb once and she plays as if I didn’t know what’s going on. On the other hand I could be playing the dumb route and have a single concern and she shows off everything like its nothing right now the sorry isn’t really a story. Change that make a few Clear paths maybe you will be able to switch and change them but if she thinks he believes her not doing stuff why would she shot him cheating once he askes a simple question of concern.

All this may only be my few but I’m still convinced it would help improve the game. This will take time and effort no questions asked I know how hard game development is but I trust in you to bring this game to glory. 

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yeha I agree with your 1st, 3rd and 5th point almost all phone pov games like this one  you can jump right to the action and the texting interactions make you feel like you're texting chatGPT who can't say no to you.

I really hope the developer take your opinion into consideration 

oh wow im sorry i've been pretty busy and didn't see this im sorry for that

1.I honestly like your chapter and contact idea, I think I might actually use this in the future because while i wasn't planning on working on this game for a few years I don't want it to reach like chapter 16, so I'm really grateful for this suggestion!

2.Believe it or not this is my highest prioty right now because trust me it's just as frustrating or probably more for me, knowing theres a lot of bugs and you can't fix them all. It is a gradual thing but I haven't recieved as much complaints from the spin off so I think that might've fixed a few things

3.I actually would've loved to do this but in the first version of my game there was an annoying glitch where the text will just go by really fast AND the screen kept going all the way to the top, so I had to make the first chapter fast so the player wouldn't get annoyed (it was a big problem i had no idea how to fix), while it sucks that had to happen and I couldn't go with my original plan I did try a soft reboot in chapter 4

4. I'm actually in the progress of improving this, I wanted it to be unlockable from the start but i'm gonna be honest. I think a bigger prioty is the foundational stuff before this because I want to add an undo button and skip button since a lot of people have been requesting it

5.thats more of a problem with the older chapters due to me not knowing how to properly write in dialogic but newer problems it is being actively fixed (or at least the best to my abilities) i want the player to feel like they have actual sway in the conversation and i'm trying new writing flows to see how i can closer get there

Thank you for your feedback! I really love this game and I only hope to improve while sometimes i get sad this is just called a cash crab, people like you remind me that other people love this project (or probably more) then me!