I finished the game! Everything seemed to be working properly now and I managed to get passed the bus stop. This wasn't a bad debut! I think you did fine with the game mechanics. I made a Let's Play video showcasing my experience and I took some time in the outro to review the game a bit more. Underneath the video I'll also give some of my feedback in text.
The story is an important factor for me in a horror game and there wasn't much of a story in this game to be honest. Of course there is a protagonist that goes through a nightmarish loop and you can progress the game by flipping switches in the underground maze, but beside that not much is going on. I hope you can focus more on story in the future when you get the hang of making games!I also thought the traps in the underground maze were distracting. The monsters were supposed to be scary but I wasn't really paying attention to being scared because I was so focused on finding my way through the traps and getting away from the monsters that I didn't have space in my mind to even be scared anymore.
This is a loop game so I understand there being a repetative factor in this game, but the second loop made me do exactly the same as the first and that felt a bit lazy to me. I would've prefered to see some real changes in the second part of the game or at least to see something new.
But the overal experience was okay! Keep on going and good luck! Hope to see more of your games in the future.