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First question do you have a Patreon I can use to follow you?

Second thing I know you're still developing the game, but something I noticed while playing the latest version is that if the MC tells his GF "It's up to you" when talking about if she should talk to Catharine and Lucy she gets mad, but it doesn't change the outcome with Catharine. It's just a thought, but I think it would make for a compelling story if the player goes down this route that instead of the Futas trying to drive a wedge by making the MC out to be crazy they make her out to be. Kind of make it so the story starts going in the opposite direction, where she can't let it go and the main character is the one seeming to be okay with things. I know it's a big deviation, but I feel it would open up a lot of avenues that you could pursue like different ways to corrupt the GF and the main character. Personally I would like it to be possible for the main character to be able to be corrupted and taken by the Futa as well otherwise it kind of feels like a wasted opportunity to me. If not, then one of the Futas leading him astray like befriending him and going out to a night club without the GF, where he fucks around. I know the game is primarily about the GF being taken away, but it feels so one sided so far. Or even opening up the game to allow possible body transformation where the MC becomes a girl or sissification, making being brainwashed into a mindless slave only one of several possible endings for the MC.

Third it felt like I had to try and choose the worst options to encourage the GF to stray at points and the worst she got to was 75 I think, then it jumped back up to 95 shortly after so I basically got no where. This is where I think one of the Futas or Lin would make for a good "Friend" to the MC, someone that pretends to be your friend only to lie to your GF about what you said or do. If you do go down a MC corruption path where they fuck the MC as well or catch him drunk kissing someone, this "Friend" could take pictures and show the GF and so on.

Finally, my general thoughts are that I like it so far and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of the game. My hope is that the game opens up a bit more in that the main character is able to be corrupted as well, as I feel like this will allow the game to flow in a more natural way and make for a more realistic and compelling story overall. In the end this is your game and up to you to decide what to do and what you're open to. I hope this comment gives you some ideas and you take this as fan just hoping to see more content. Take care.

CandySH60 days ago

Hello GreyHornet54!
Thank you very much for trying my game and for giving me your opinion so thoroughly.
I will try to go step by step to answer your points, hoping that I won't leave anything out.

I do not have a Patreon or a Subscribestar, I'm not delusional to think there is enough content inside the game just yet to monetize it. Later? Yes, surely, since I want this to become my livelihood (which aren't big dreams if you ask me, currently my 8 hours job earns me 900ish $) but as of now, I accept no payment from anyone, because I don't feel like I should even expect it, but thank you very much for thinking this way, I really appreciate it.

"Second thing I know you're still developing the game, but something I noticed while playing the latest version is that if the MC tells his GF "It's up to you" when talking about if she should talk to Catharine and Lucy she gets mad, but it doesn't change the outcome with Catharine" -
Think of it like this: Both Catherine's and Lucy's bad ending need 3 points to achieve them. Whenever a choice appears to tell either Lucy or Catherine about what you or your GF saw, you earn one point towards that character. You can go 1-0, 0-1 or 1-1. To alter the scenes in between, while it was very much possible, not something I could focus on, I was happy I could put everything together to work as it should, because this was my first huge project. I will try to write scenes that differentiate even more throughout your choices in the future.

"Personally I would like it to be possible for the main character to be able to be corrupted and taken by the Futa as well otherwise it kind of feels like a wasted opportunity to me." - There are little signs, foreshadowing for this to happen in the current patch. No scenes, but a new character portrait at a certain scene, if you read everything carefully :-) To speak frankly, there are hints in this patch for Futa On Male content for the future.

"Third it felt like I had to try and choose the worst options to encourage the GF to stray at points and the worst she got to was 75 I think, then it jumped back up to 95 shortly after so I basically got no where." - Do not feel bad about this, right now there are no scenes tied to character relationships, but it will certainly need to be balanced, so one can raise or lower it to their heart's conent, right now, it was just another layer of test if it works well, changing some of the dialogues, for example.

To ALL of your ideas, thank you very much, I'd say a lot of them I already planned or in some form I planned and will be involved in the future updates. Once again, I appreciate you for sharing your opinion, thank you very much! :)

- CandySH

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