I was stoked to find out that this is more of a long con in terms of lewdness and it's much more gravitated towards its lore/story. As someone who plays these games with the intention of looking into the plotlines, the game is going pretty well. Without spoilers, in terms of AVN standard it's easily a perfect game so far. If I had to point something that I didn't like (but not necessarily hate because I understand what kind of game this is and what it's used for) was the pacing of the girls and the whole campus. By pacing, I meant that it's all going way too fast specifically for me since I was told that this was not going to be one of those games only to get off to. I'm also noticing that even outright h-scenes from different games are more modest than how the girls handle their clothing because those were really short skirts and almost everyone basically had their panties out in broad daylight. But like I said I can't really complain about that because in the end of the day it's still an AVN and it wouldn't be fair for me to complain. So overall I think what I'm trying to say is that it could use some slowing down but by doing so it could be hard to keep tabs on there girls as well because if the author did slow down the girls' lewdness progression the author probably would be writing this story for a decade lmao. It's just that almost every relationship seems so organic and not forced and it's hard to not complement that with a slower approach in their relationship with the mentor so they may be characters that will bond with the reader and make them a lasting memory just like how famous novel characters are remembered. Now my realistic hope for this game (setting aside my preferences), first that it never gets abandoned because it really is a joy to read, second is to have impactful choices in the future, and third is to not waste the potential organic chemistry between the girls and the mentor. Overall, so far, it's an 8/10. I think it's fair to say that you're doing a really really good job. Thank you BRdsky for this awesome experience!!! I will for sure come back to this after a while.
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Thank you, Amommymous for your comment. It was a pleasure to read your review. About your words:
1) The game will not be abandoned. I have ups and downs in my life, but I never thought of closing my project. It's my childhood dream (to write) let it be terrible, let it be without special knowledge, but I do what I love and I get pleasure from it.
2) About important choices they will be. I continue to expand my knowledge in the code and in the next updates there will be important choices. I just don't want to complicate the code with millions of choice branches, since there are a lot of girls in the game and it can be quite complicated.
3) Each girl has a different character and their organic attitude towards the mentor will be different. Of course we should not forget the fetishes of some girls that will make it harder or easier to get close to them. I'm not going to do a fuck fest anytime soon, everyone will have to go from kissing to sex through their own personal story.
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Thank you for taking the time to read that lengthy comment. Since everything was covered I think I can say that I am happy for you and your game. May you continue to be better with the codes and technical stuff for making the game that you envision it to be. I'm sure that if you keep going in that direction, you'll do great. Thank you again and I hope you do well!