This game overall is very good when you compare it to most the AVN's out there. That's pretty much the short version. Now for the long version. I absolutely love the main plotline of this AVN, it's something new and that's refreshing to see. As for me who plays these AVN's mainly for the plotlines, I do have some things that I wanted to be improved upon but I would never impose upon the author. I want to start this off with making sure that I really do think that this game is so good so the following things I'm about to discuss are just my preferences and not necessarily criticism in any way, shape, or form. Also I am aware that games like these MOSTLY target people who are looking for something to get off to so really these words mean nothing. The storyline itself is pretty good, the issue I have with it is that it's all done very quickly with not much room to bond the player/reader with the story's characters. The schedules were also off and it ruined the immersion that I had (vacation this weekend = a month I think, meet Angelo on Monday = also a month I think) so I distracted myself to not ruin it further for me. The girls were also pretty much on the player's nose most of the time because if you say/do something they like they'll immediately jump you on a relationship the next or few interactions later, in short there were no bonding over with them too aside from what's given to us readers which is mostly transitional months. So I think this lead to an overall a quick experience (I finished it in one day but that's not a bad thing).One thing's for sure though, Richard and Clark were some of the best characters in this particular genre of AVN's! I was stoked to see that another AVN managed to design likable males (well I get that Clark is gay but I meant in terms of natural sex). So overall I really liked this so far. Will I still be reading/playing the next chapters? Absolutely! Do I expect anything to change? Not really because it's hard enough to make an AVN let alone a lone dev and from the looks of it it's not the Dev's main source of income so it could be hard to balance everything. So absolutely no pressure, you're doing great Poopcicle!!! So that's about everything, a solid 4/5. Thank you for this adorable AVN Poopcicle!!! Have a nice day