Some of my views after finishing the new version of the first chapter:
1) I'm not sure whether I should have read the character sheets at the main page of the game... there seems to be a major spoiler about "Tom"...
2) To the sprites - I like them, but in the scenes in which the characters sit by the table it seemed weird that they were suddenly standing when they talked.
3) When Gabe sees Chase in the bar, he calls him a man instead of boy. It doesn't feel right, Chase isn't that old. :)
4) Favourite sprite: angry Nix with raised brow.
5) I still love the "How do you eat a clockwork orange" line, it's so funny. :D
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I love what Ty does for Nix in the chapter 2, it made me cry a little. And I'm so happy you didn't sprite out the scene with Chase, those some of your best CGs ever.
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I liked chapter 3 and can't wait whether Nix tells others about Gabe. :)