I like that Esther keeps hinting that she wants a baby. The MC should ask her about a baby to surprise her instead. Also, congratulations on making an incredible and very immersive game. Every character (including side characters) is incredibly unique but also make me genuinely invested in them. Cheers to the upcoming v0.22! One very small criticism, there are so many side characters that the main characters don't get as much updating. Another Velle event would be nice, like a lap dance at the club. Maybe have the MC contact his mom about Beatrix's punishment and a way to fix it. Another game I play lets you hug, kiss the girls by visiting their rooms, would be a cool feature. A nice touch is some girl's will say "I love y-" and stop themselves early in the game