I genuinely mean it from the bottom of my heart that your feedback is so so incredibly helpful!! THANK YOU!! <3
I absolutely love the suggestion for Stanford's writing--seeing the player solely as an anomaly at first. I'm already buzzing with ideas on how that'll deepen the connection he builds with the player. 🤭
And I so agree with the inconsistency of Ford's hesitancy! That was something I struggled with writing-wise, trying to balance his character while also trying to focus the demo's lens on the romance aspect--so I really appreciate the easy fix suggestion!
I'm so excited to revise what I've got and continue with the project! <3<3 Thank you so much for playing and for taking the time to give me such in-depth suggestions and constructive criticism! :D It seriously means so much! <3