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I just started the game but the dialogue is terrible, it's like it's all copied from google translate. I may return to it in future as the story seems okay but the terrible English is so off-putting. 

Would definitely recommend the Devs take more insight from native English speakers.

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Thank you for your feedback and feel free to delete the game at any time, we don't force you to read terrible dialogue.
Regards
Tom 

You do know that your games would be better if you didn't get defensive about criticism.  You chose to publish this, and even harsh criticism  is given in the hopes of making things better.  Telling people they are wrong, or dismissing them is just missing the point

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You know you haven't done any work on this game. You come here like the axe in the wood and criticize in a way that tells any creative individual that it would be better to die than to be creative. We know that both accounts here belong to the same author and as Tom said, you are free to delete the game as that's the last thing we want to do - to torture you with "terrible" dialogue.