Excellent job, another suggestion, if you do another first-person sex scene I think it would be better if the girl's nipples could be seen during the scene.
And continue with the impregnations, they are very good.
About your post that I deleted.
Let’s not post something like that directly into the comments. Itch.io is not a specialty subreddit, there could always be normal people around.
As the nipples I do try to squeeze them in when I can, but for some angles it just doesn't work out.
As for the sound request, maybe when I have nothing else I want to work on. I can't really muster the motivation at the moment, sorry.