I'm not quite sure what the intent of the story is? There's way too many elements taken from Emesis Blue. Is it supposed to be a homage or a parody? The part with Lebron James told me it was meant to be funny.
But it's a bit hard to tell what the characters are. We don't spend too much time with them other than escaping the slaughterhouse and such. Again, the elements directly taken from the movie confused me as such.
I do think your furry characters are cute though.